Why Section II moves with the right feedback
Most students write more essays and hope repetition will fix the problem. The higher-yield move is diagnosing the pattern: weak contention, vague examples, moralising, poor paragraph logic or endings that do not land.
Dan's GAMSAT Section II coaching gives you marked essays, theme work and a reusable way to turn prompts into original, defensible arguments under time pressure.
Argument firstBuild a clear thesis before worrying about elegant language.
Marked feedbackKnow exactly why an essay is stuck at 62, 68 or 75+.
Theme coveragePower, identity, progress, suffering, justice, technology, love and more.
Practice ecosystemUse the free S2 platform and reading list between sessions.
What sessions focus on
| Area | What changes |
|---|---|
| Thesis quality | Move from "both sides" essays to a clear, contestable argument. |
| Examples | Use examples with conceptual weight rather than name-dropping history or philosophy. |
| Paragraph logic | Make every paragraph advance the argument rather than repeat the prompt. |
| Timed execution | Choose a plan quickly and write without freezing. |
Bring one essay and one goal
Dan can mark your current writing, identify the highest-leverage fix, and give you a concrete plan for the next sitting.
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